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lalita

insy winsy babes
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criss-crossing upon tight ropes
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spun by mother's love
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23 Nov 10

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ya don't need the intro note: the inspiration belonged to you. give it away in the poem.

nice haiku.
 — NicMichaels

Thanks NicMichaels, took your suggestion and deleted the intro. ;)
 — lalita

; )
 — fractalcore

Thanks Fractal ;)
 — lalita

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