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you-me-verse
fractalcore

how small
 1
can the imagination get?
 2
or, how far
 3
can it expand?
 4
how tensile? how resilient?
 5
i forget --
 6
 
 
delusional
 7
in more ways than one,
 8
in swollen proportions
 9
too heavy
 10
for a cosmic scale.
 11
 
 
swell,
 12
nonetheless,
 13
redundantly: infinitesimally
 14
minute next twoo mmm'eye
 15
intellæctual faux pas.
 16
 
 
abracadabra, mAUMa...
 17
dah-deh-dih-DOH-DUH!
 18




http://vimeo.com/9186811

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fractalcore
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special thanks to raskolniikov
for sharing the following links:

http://www.nikon.com/about/feelnikon/universcale/index_f.htm
http://primaxstudio.com/stuff/scale_of_universe/

@ http://www.poetrycritical.net/forum/read/243888/


happy new year, ever-one!

; )

31 Dec 10

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happy new year fracalackin~
eat two tacos and hip hip hooray.
;)
 — mandolyn

1 to 11 excellent.
 — jharrison

thank you rubbee mander and
other-jen-oh-side-of-things.

fractured bones having a hard
time pushing the rusty pen
trying twoo cap-chew'r a
foe-ton speeding bye.

; )
 — fractalcore

Love 1-6.  Happy New Year Frac!
 — sybarite

nice poem.  all 'cept maybe line 18.   dig the rest though.
 — JKWeb

It is always a pleasure! often takes some time to untwist the tie, but nonetheless
a pleasure. *happy happy joy joy.
 — unknown

back to back to back?
 — unknown

thank you, all.
don't you find 'nonetheless' pointless
and just a prose move?

: )
 — fractalcore

i still remember this and the other one and others more. real clever by all means, inside out, what have you got.
 — unknown

Loverly!! thanks
 — unknown

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