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bookish

curious,
 1
when you entered
 2
I felt no arctic gust or
 3
chill along my back
 4
 
 
a visage warmed
 5
with charming hesitation,
 6
dear bohemian poet
 7
 
 
I saw the audit of curly locks
 8
and the kindness to the tired volumes
 9
the hidden adoration
 10
 
 
do not hide it
 11
 
 
for even with my vision
 12
I can read an open book
 13
when I see one.
 14

13 Jan 11

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:)
 — _fallenleaf

Good one
 — Caliana

i like your stuff.
 — mandolyn

i fell apart when i first read this, those first 7 lines, no 10, well i loved all of it and couldn't bring myself to defame it with a useless comment.  thing is i don't like my list of favourites being in a dark blue state and yours was one of the only ones i hadn't made peace with.  

thank you for sharing your poem
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excellent
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