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sugar-coated
softyetharsh

why I’d read sweet writes
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in my face
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and literally
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a privileged view -
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your sweetest lie
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sparks
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smiles, ‘sugar-coating’,
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her valentine?
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7 Feb 11


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it sounds like someone talking to the three of them
 — mandolyn

indeed. lol. must be three-way traffic
 — unknown

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