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beyond the last smoke of winter
OCTOGENARIAN

strokes of sun highlight your blonde  
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summer girl, radiating March into heat
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sweet as the pink blossoms on your skin
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flocks of birds fly to treetops
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dipping down from the beads in your eyes
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that make me laugh the way I did in dreams as a boy
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was it you that I dreamt of?
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21 Mar 11

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i like the title.
the poem is slightly sweet.
 — mandolyn

lovely lil poem. Ed
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