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fried eggs, sausages and beans- queens
mr_e

my chubby friends
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make me look slimmer
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When I go out tonight
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I will throw up my dinner.
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13 May 11

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Don't do that  :(
 — faith

oh poor darling
 — unknown

you regurgitate funny
 — mandolyn

keep it down cus your a big girl now
 — larrylark

You need to throw up this poem,
the thought that you would
write this and try passing it
off as poetry is sad and
Pathetic :(
 — unknown

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