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i like gloves and smooth
butter, and palms,
and sunny laughter.
i like it when the shoes
are all aligned like little pets
and the bubbles in the bath
when the yellow eyes of a mouse
sneak by my snores
and when you come home
and want to wake me
to say goodnight,  
this is what i like.

24 May 11

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very cute
 — unknown

this should be dedicated to linus
 — jenakajoffer

 — DeformedLion

hahaha, it's your poem! now that's funny.

wow...i'm good.  :)
 — jenakajoffer

this is what i like

(yes, i know)
 — DeformedLion