poetry critical

online poetry workshop



blanket
DeformedLion

i like gloves and smooth
 1
butter, and palms,
 2
and sunny laughter.
 3
 
 
i like it when the shoes
 4
are all aligned like little pets
 5
and the bubbles in the bath
 6
collide.
 7
 
 
when the yellow eyes of a mouse
 8
sneak by my snores
 9
and when you come home
 10
and want to wake me
 11
to say goodnight,  
 12
 
 
this is what i like.
 13

24 May 11

Rated 10 (10) by 2 users.
Active (2): 10
Inactive (0): 10

(define the words in this poem)
(368 more poems by this author)

(2 users consider this poem a favorite)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

very cute
 — unknown

this should be dedicated to linus
 — jenakajoffer

why?
 — DeformedLion

hahaha, it's your poem! now that's funny.

wow...i'm good.  :)
 — jenakajoffer

this is what i like

(yes, i know)
 — DeformedLion

0.583s