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Gumb love
jenakajoffer

repost 2009

i got my pretty kitty
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kitty in the window;
 2
got my poodle hair poofy,
 3
round bottom
 4
tucked in my pantyhose
 5
 
 
go ahead, mac
 6
put a fish-hook in my skin
 7
lay my egg in a hole,
 8
make a skirt casserole
 9
 
 
just a little kibble for the precious
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then clobber down,
 11
make ware with my skull
 12
add a scarf to warm your bowl
 13
 
 
i'll dab your mouth
 14
with a plus-size nappy,
 15
rub lotion on your basket
 16
while we dance to queer lazarus–
 17
just don't blow it,
 18
or i'll give you the hose again
 19
 
 
you know how love is.
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1 Jun 11

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this is shit.
 — raskolniikov

^ your shit should stink so sweet between Egyptian cotton sheets
 — unknown

haha, know what's funny?  you kinda liked this poem a couple years ago, =-)
you were particuarly fond of line 7.  i remember everything.

but yeah, i read it again and it is shit.
but it makes me laugh.
 — jenakajoffer

gumbO
climb me rubber tree
 — unknown

i cannot believe someone is tenning this.  
i reposted so that my bill collection was back intact here, for my baby blue.
 — jenakajoffer

^ well people 10 poets, not poems. it's all about cliques here.
 — unknown

yes that is true, some people just 10 the poet, but i am not a clique.
 — jenakajoffer

LOL!!
 — unknown

i like this! lovely sounds
 — AlexJose

so cute, i just love yummy mothers, full of maternal love.
 — unknown

cute is an odd response, which i like, and thank you for the compliment
but underneath i am a cruel hag.
 — jenakajoffer

A grammar and punctuation hag
 — unknown

how would you know?

that i am. :)
 — jenakajoffer

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