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Kisses
lalita

Air kisses the leaves
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sky lit with bold graffiti
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thunderous applause
 3

7 Jun 11

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Hey, nice for a haiku!  Appropriate length, appropriate topic and I love the thunderous adjective, it's perfect.
 — Isabelle5

Agreed, love the "thunderous applause"
 — dreamingg

nice imagery!
 — jenakajoffer

♥ this.

been awhile, lalita.
i've missed a lot of your new works.

: )
 — fractalcore

i must admit that it's so hard to write haikus or 5-7-5 pieces. this one in particular astounds me. you paint a storm in lovely hues -- you wrote it in a way that cushions the impact.

: )
 — fractalcore

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