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fractalcore

[REKtifying your premise]
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      again: 1 + 1 = 1
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                w
 3
                h
 4
                e
 5
                n
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        perpendicular
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                l
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                i
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                n
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                e
 11
                s
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            become
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            parallel,
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              AND
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'i really think we should start developing a 'secret' nose-button for teleportation purposes, so we could discard the rather hackneyed phrase that goes 'don't pick your nose in public'.'
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              END.
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^  that, incidentally, is a vulcan hand, but you can also say that it's an ugly duckling's foot.
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if it were a supervulcan's hand or an uber-ugly duckling's foot, it would look like this:
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\||///
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now, just imagine what an extra digit can do for the owner of such appendages.
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more importantly, what kin eye say butt eats in-duh-genus, and don't listen to the seemingly-conscientious banana convictions you find here by any random chance.
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most importantly, please ignore the primate've utterances ensuing beyond the legal line number, 18, because they obviously don't reinforce this rather stolid attempt at a poo'em.
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yores truly nee-an-dirt-all,
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toed duh wet spock it [writing @ this very gneiss palindromic point in spacetime, 11-6-11 aka 11 june 2011, with his vision currently @ 'heist' for 'reason' obvious to the initiated; otherwise, all hail unique snowflakes and hailstones alike.]
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for the Nth time and with all
the love in the multiverse,

whatever works [for all dorks]!


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11 Jun 11

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nice poem.  enjoyed the visual syntax.  two thumbs up
like the fonz.
 — JKWeb

dork!!

lol

havent heard that term in years!!
 — unknown

thanks, JKWebster sir.

; )
 — fractalcore

hello, unk.

well, things like that
come and go, don't they?

more precisely, they get
beamed up here and there.

; )
 — fractalcore

hmm...
 — unknown

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