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i'll sleep again
softyetharsh

weariness be a smile
 1
off soft tongues
 2
all encompassing
 3
 
 
our gorging bodies
 4
grind rhythms
 5
protruding flesh
 6
 
 
worn. titillates
 7
is our becoming
 8
commanding bliss
 9

5 Jul 11

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 — Odin

whos is it?
its goooood, i want it!!!!!!
 — Odin

i doubt line 7 though ..is it gramatically acceptable?
 — unknown

thanks, odin
 — unknown

gneiss.
; )
 — fractalcore

not grumpy, this time. do you notice it gneissly, fractalcore? harhar :D
 — softyetharsh

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