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Take a knife and stab me in your pants
sahibtorun

Take a knife and stab me,
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Swirl me around and hurl me.
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What is life when there is so much pain?
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Just crippling you,
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And ripping you.
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Only giving you a moment of relief,
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Before stabbing you,
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And stabbing you,
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To make sure you are dead,
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Even though you have been laying there for hours
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In a pool of blood,
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With your face so serene
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so lifeless
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and in these final moments,
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you ask yourself the most important question of life
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Should I have waffles or scrambled eggs for breakfast?
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waffles...
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scrambled eggs...
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waffles...
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scrambled eggs....
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scrambled eggs
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Both....
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Both
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28 Jul 11

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ten
with flying colours
 — funes

Thank you
 — sahibtorun

you've been listening to old jack benny programs again and didn't think any of us would know this routine.
 — trashpoodle

Im sorry trashpoodle i dont know who jack benny is...i had to google him...Im asian living in singapore...i dont know your american culture.
 — sahibtorun

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