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a spurt I revisited
upon waking up
sun-dried, minced
a ground's tattoo
of flesh -
lost two perverts

11 Sep 11

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gotta read as well other than the revisits. lol
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meant to be literal actually. the insight of mbauer made me stop & think, i appreciate the perspective i've not thought of. maybe refer to subject what's with this.
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a difficult revisit
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i don't mean to have a difficult revisit
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