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restlessness
lalita

Foaming water's edge
 1
hurls with restless abandon
 2
pounds primal pulses
 3

25 Sep 11

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surely unfinished, repost please.
 — unknown

hurls
 — unknown

Ok, second attempt titled 'pulse'.
 — lalita

Changed title to 'undulations' ;)
 — lalita

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