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Skulking from The Lark
sisotowbel

...it took time to digest;
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I'd never have imagined
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these worlds would collide.
 3
 
 
Whole body sigh,
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deflated under Suffolk sky,
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majority blue.
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It's a dusty grey of green,
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beans and beacons in red;
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Poppy stars scattered,
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occasionally a cluster.
 10
 
 
Below leguminous sway
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is a history of crop.
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I manipulate,
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uprooting a runt.
 14
 
 
Kneeling,
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digging,
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shoes in the mud;
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I imagine myself minuscule
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and this a large forest:
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Idle chews pod,
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incidental at his mouth,
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and sees a tongue entice from stem
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just a few limbs deep:
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A ball,
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a bubble,
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a bulbous puddle:
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It solicits a kiss,
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it teases with quench,
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sends hurrying into green
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for lapping at plants' armpits.
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I claw clods
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and earth smells ground;
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close eyes and prime the ear:
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Hear each gust
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in sweep-strokes;
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wind comes flocking
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in simultaneous flight.
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Poppies bear their colour like uniform:
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The consensus calls it scarlet,
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but I saw a deep set
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in old blood of crimson.
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Then, like a loss
 42
came my limp state,
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a depletion of soul;
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compulsion to lie down
 45
and comfort seen only in sleep...
 46

9 Oct 11

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intriguing read.  melikes a lot.
 — JKWeb

another thing about the fields and the open sky is that there might be no end to it, no disharmony nor period piece bells chiming without resonance.
 — DeformedLion

excellent poem
 — larrylark

Hello mbauer,

the bible was far from my mind when i wrote this -
it usually is.
But i just found this text relating to the Pentecost...
is it something of the below which you refer to?

"and suddenly there came a sound from heaven as of a rushing mighty wind, and it filled all the house where they were sitting, and there appeared unto them cloven tongues like as of fire, and it sat upon each of them"
 — sisotowbel

there is something silly going on with this pentecost stuff.
ignore it, sis.
 — unknown

mbauer is saying this sort of thing on many poems in a very childish attempt to insult isabelle
 — unknown

gardening usually heals the wounds that reason makes, while your garden reflects life's struggles and epiphanies, and more to your point, a place to lay down your miseries in a blanket of forget-me-nots ... it's nicely rolling down the page like muddy water pooling then going to ground ...
 — AlchemiA

your last sentence -
what a lovely comment...

thanks AlchemiA
 — sisotowbel

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