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the paradox of the white dwarf & serenderellanata
fractalcore

every
 1
aardvark
 2
minute
 3
 
 
precludes
 4
the 'future'
 5
with its swelling
 6
countenance --
 7
 
 
and, i count
 8
the days
 9
with pimpled virility
 10
 
 
'coz i don't have you
 11
there, but here right now:
 12
 
 
cranium and rib cage
 13
put under a swell
 14
             spell...
 15
 
 
cats and dogs
 16
             transcending
 17
an ecological
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             impasse;
 19
 
 
not a dream of ours
 20
will come to pass
 21
without hitting rock-
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             bottom,
 23
 
 
rabid and furious
 24
             as the truth held
 25
by the furnace
 26
             in the stars...
 27




for my black swan
with all the love
i can muster

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10 Nov 11

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English 101:  The pronoun "I" is always capitalized.
 — unknown

thank you, dear unk, but i think the
glorious days of the capitalized 'I' are
long-gone.

any nits aside from that?

; )
 — fractalcore

hi, mike. how you been?

; )
 — fractalcore

agreed, fuck I. i i love u forever.
 — unknown

interesting, black swan. i bet the nape exudes elegance..

nice read, thanx..

wat's aardvark, anyway?
 — unknown

why faved? a pleasure to read you. this is new strike..hmm..a year of vateffah!
 — softyetharsh

yes, bauer. methinks this piece was written for the love of writing rather than what it implies half-heartedly. author can always rebut. but this is all wise & 10 ;)
 — unknown

{@}
{~}

like!
 — unknown

this thread has been bumped up so many times, it's no longer a paradox.
 — unknown

subject escapes gracefully. have merci, i'm speaking of a genius. can't wait to finalize the study. talking paradox.
 — unknown

quantoom boompfh...

:p
 — fractalcore

nice. you play with colloquialism and "fancy" words. cool tactic.
 — listen

ey, listen!

been awhile. thanks
and a happy new year to you!

; )
 — fractalcore

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