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he doesn't know this
softyetharsh

i am hallucinating i can hear
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tiptoeing as soon as
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the elevator stops. a slow bang
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of the door keeps half of me
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waiting.         trespassing
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never have been that easy unlike finding
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on bed the other half of me sleeping.
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the point - always missing. he doesn't get that
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no man, i suppose. i'm only losing to argument
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of his being and my displacement;  this love
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of the doors
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.
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23 Dec 11

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