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I croak to your breath,
unknown

Your highness,
 1
restore this other world into an empire
 2
our sanity we surrender
 3
into each other's grave;
 4
I wade past the storm not knowing you are thunder -
 5
                                   the gods anger
 6
perhaps you are lightning
 7
a defiance to morality I deserve;
 8
I truly lust
 9
breathe my hell's heaven
 10
my princess, you are.
 11
 
 
 
 
I croak to your breath,
 12
 
 
      
 13
 
 
Frog Prince Lover
 14
    at the bath
 15

8 Jan 12

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lines 2-11 are excellent.   the rest--- not as strong as the rest of the write imho.
 — JKWeb

LOL

ha

oh op. sorry. nice
 — Clara

'a defiance to morality I deserved;'

'my hell's heaven'

mind-numbing
 — unknown

nice title image, like a greek chorus voiced like newt gingrich over princess di mouthing the ever-immortal. not what could be done with a little blood in your veins.
 — cadmium

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