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OCTOGENARIAN

God creates the dogwood tree-
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heaven sighs
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27 Jan 12

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comments?
 — OCTOGENARIAN

'sighs', but 'barks' would maybe be funny.
 — cadmium

dude, you posted this like a day ago, and you're begging for comments? you're on a million boards, and never comment - why should we?

aside from that - am i missing something here?? are you?? this is a poem?

say something, dude, or stop this weenie posting.
 — unknown

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