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Poem written at Sextons Show Thursday April 16,1992
Rely

So there I am,
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hanging out with the fashion doctor
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watching Thundercock and eating
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chili, we laughed, we drank
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She told me what to buy
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And I can't wait till Sunday
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I'm gonna read her in the bathroom
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I'm gonna take her in the bedroom
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And I'm there like a dog in the rain
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with her dog and we're both getting
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wet
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aren't you even going to share some dog biscuits together first?

get ready for rejection bonzo.
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Strong story line. An artistic form
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