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Trapped in Purgatory
CaseyPowers

clawing at the door
 1
death rarely comes
 2
for those who expect it
 3
it’s lottery on a whim
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the drawing sped
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through the shut eye of time
 6
by crack smoking
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whoring
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gluttony
 9
and sloth
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but sometimes
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people
 12
just don’t die
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no matter how hard
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they try
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short of flat out suicide
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some might say a guardian angel
 17
looks out
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or it could just be hell on earth
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what it is ain’t for me to decide
 20
but sometimes I wonder
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the big why--
 22
I guess that is what church is for
 23
looking for answers
 24
in an old book
 25
that the smooth crinkly pages
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just don’t tell
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while the good
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continue
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to die young
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14 Apr 12

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Interesting point of view.  You have to keep walking, no early escape possible.
 — Isabelle5

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