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your lines
wrinkling a smiley on my face
a key stuck cheeky
webcum icky --
'lil spidey lining the saddest on your face

8 Jul 12

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Larry rushes to the mirror after snatching the wife's anti wrinkle cream and a twenty pound note from her handbag. This is a very neatly done poem

Larry new crack and old jokes Lark
 — larrylark

What?  Lines 4-5 could be left off without anything missing.
 — unknown

this as good as cream pies.  
 — repeatme

thanks, larry stick-o lark, unknown and repeatyou, er, me. ;)
 — iliili