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Careful with that Russian Mystic Eugene
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At the back of an In-N-Out Burger,
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fingerless gloves and fries.
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Removing flesh from spirit
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I await the Lord's reply.
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A belly-full of sacred longing,
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two double cheeseburgers
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and the Father's Consuming Flame -
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silently destroying all that I am.
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Dividing marrow from bone
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I walk beneath a Utah underpass.
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Like Moses, I am wandering alone
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in the shadow of a Chevron station,
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trying to coax a vein out of hiding
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by a dumpster and an old faux leather sofa -
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trying to re-imagine the face of God.
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The dark horizon stretches on
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forever,
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as Mount Athos overlooks the sea.
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17 Jul 12

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You know that what you eat you are.

Larry sweet and sour Lark
 — larrylark

Larry what shall we eat? Lark
 — unknown

What if you eat God?
 — unknown

A moderate amount of most things will do you good

Larry a little bit of this and a little bit of that Lark
 — larrylark

^all things in excess
 — unknown

thanks larry
 — unknown

I'll take a 4
 — 9

eating god, having sex with god,
this is what is really happening when god comes into you
and you become pregnant with his child.
and that child is the real you.
 — 9

there is no god
 — unknown

fantastic filming. loved the documentary. thanks
 — funes

funes: 'Into Great Silence' is another really good film. Have you seen that one?
 — 9

A very warm and heart felt poem
 — cassell

hey nien . ..  no. i dont recall . ..  will google thanks!
 — funes

ah ok yes parts. i have some of the music. love it. thanks
 — funes

“Beating heroin is child's play compared to beating your childhood.”
 — unknown

^ lol. Words of wisdom Lloyd. Words. of. wisdom.
 — unknown

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