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ain't nothin'
peace

conveniently
 1
how could you
 2
fucking
 3
resist
 4
the open door
 5
the naked girl
 6
saying
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fuck me
 8
give me some shit
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an open toilet bowl.
 10
 
 
it could only
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be
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because
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you're already
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in a hole.
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shitting.
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taking a
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moment
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or more than.
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with another who
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drinks your milk.
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really?
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you'd actually
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find another?
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why
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why
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why
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do
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i
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i
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i
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care?
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because im hurt
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if not hurting
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with my own drama.
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is that
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why
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why
 38
why
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i
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i
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i was so addicted
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to you
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and your nonsense
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and your crying
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and your bullshit
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and your
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and im
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not yours...
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16 Aug 12

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very nice writing.
 — cadmium

ignore the pedophile cadmium / james bauer
 — unknown

but a hung hound  . .. . dog
 — funes

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