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mouth full
unknown

like a well oiled piston
 1
i ascend and descend
 2
without delay.
 3
 
 
eyes locked on me
 4
for once
 5
he smiles proudly
 6
as if he is experiencing
 7
the pinnacle of German
 8
engineering.
 9
 
 
sometimes i act possessed
 10
go from angel to addict
 11
in six seconds or less
 12
which usually motivates
 13
his hands to smooth my hair
 14
with a tenderness
 15
rarely expressed and
 16
guarantee a twenty on the dresser
 17
 
 
before i rinse.
 18
 
 
leaves
 19
nothing to unconvince me
 20
he always likes me more
 21
when i am silent.
 22





there'a porsche on your dick but you drive a fucking kia

27 Aug 12


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