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trying to be funny
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he is wit
 1
poetry rights
 2
per heir
 3
 
 
his sweet
 4
odor women
 5
cunt smell
 6
 
 
lust hymn
 7
in lab
 8
eye mist
 9
 
 
IM
 10
shoe-match
 11
ant moor
 12
 
 
birdies
 13
to calm
 14
weed >> meh!
 15

*heir / hair
  cunt / can't  
  lust / lost
*trying to be funny -- try the pun for endless, creative delusions

i overload with musings -- only to notice i speak on another tone; someone else's - subconsciously embedded with facts on it.

i apologize for the unintentional plagiarism (on some degree) to hop inside your thoughts and be able to write in its likeness; classic incongruity -- not having read in the last year to conclude such influence.

20 Nov 12

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haha, nut[s] bah'd...
:p
 — fractalcore

thanks, frac. you didn't say what made you fave this. was it your laugh? :p
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