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Sisterhood gone
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Let go...go
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Away from sisterhood of past
 2
Oh you drainer of blood fast
 3
There's ruin... There's guilt
 4
Poor dawn, no sun felt
 5
The silence of untouched woods...
 6
 
 
I have tossed your meaningless promises,
 7
(Your words once heard now a blur)
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And my heart mournful with beggars and bees misses,
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And I am barely breathing for air,
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When instantly this gripped me, tightning
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Seven seas, a ghostly rain,
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And a life of knotting pain...
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I shall recognize you by your obduracy
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And by your brightness and rehearsed sorries;
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I will not be kind or act
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Whilst your company among third parties...
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All the characters memorable in nightfall
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Will part from you,
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And the laughter like children's
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Will part from you,
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And there will be no more games for the story,
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In the darkness of your eyes and glory...
 23
 
 
Hazed smoke where a battle has ended,
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The mines of cover, the voices of the searching,
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And every last one fallen...Oh! There
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We've ended our warm summers with green trees...
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Our autumn with lost leaves
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Our winter with cold breeze
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And simply, our spring with memories
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17 Jan 13

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consider omitting "for air" in 10?  not sure it's needed.  nice poem.
 — JKWeb

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