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~
iliili

no way to describe
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how a pimple aches
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under my nose
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weird to illustrate
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              like this    
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              ~
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               .
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              fugly
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yearning fissure
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some split-sourcing
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                                                     pus
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above my lip
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8 Feb 13

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had to shuffle. dunno w/c works better
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Ex-foliate tilde cows come home?
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^^ what do you want?
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