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one left in the chamber
unknown

it's my lucky day-
 1
saying
 2
'hello
 3
goodbye' and
 4
stepping oh so carefully
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you'd think
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i was on
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something besides
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    eggshells
 9
 
 
i take the leaders
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down
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before they can stop me
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and they call me The Camper
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then the bed
 14
rows
 15
rows
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rows
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i keep saying
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'the brain is a cannon'
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spelling out the mess of love
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and pointless practice
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i whimper and fold over,
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i hope i don't die
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i hope i don't die
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16 Feb 13


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