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parasitic
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when it creeps you'll never understand
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if it is you to be boned
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a graveyard becomes alive
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23 Feb 13

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is L2 intentional?
i really don't know what to say
i would re write this as:

you'll never understand
the creeping, your bones
in a graveyard they are alive
________________________
I don't know... but that was fun!
 — mandolyn

.this should be read along my perspective otherwise you cannot. a little above the average is a requirement. tnx mand
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