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Rainbow Boy
jenakajoffer

he told me this morning how his woody
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peeks from his pj's;
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says it puts him on his back
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while his eyes float in the sunlight,
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puss tickling his balls with its whiskers.
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he points to the sky, says he makes big bows
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that arc across his thighs,
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bending light around his cowboys
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like a sexy lasso--
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says I ain't seen nothin'
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till he fills my mouth with skittles-
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says he'll show me his black magic
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if I let him put gumdrops in my sparkle box.
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told him I was an 80's girl
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and always loved to see a rainbow,
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that I'd give him a short go
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if he had unicorns in his pot of gold,
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and he said
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"rainbows are overrated"
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and I said
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"so are boners".
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for my lino, circa 2008
following a brief, one-time IM chat.

25 Apr 13

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I can't fault this! What an excellent piece of ribald humour! And what a conversation!
 — nemo

thanks nemo, i'm happy to see you are making your way around the site.  glad you like this poem and found the humour in it; it's also a bit of a sentimental piece for me.  "bill" was born shortly after this poem.
 — jenakajoffer

crazy- patsy cline
 — DeformedLion

ah, the perfect theme song
 — jenakajoffer

I reckon y'all should have "crazy in love" as a theme song

jen beyonce!

:-)
 — fortuitous

i have never heard of that song, fortiu
 — jenakajoffer

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