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way love, wave of rainbow
DeformedLion

way love ought to be:
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its me,
 2
smoked in the window,
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somehow less fishy than
 4
that sailors' spine
 5
you
 6
 
 
   ripped
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     out
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    from
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     my
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    bo
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    d  
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      y
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       .
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salt enshrined;
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leafing through chiffon gowns
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and parlour tricks,
 17
you railroad me
 18
zipper-mary
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and cut my mouth off at the seam.
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there was blood on the outside that time, i guess
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i swelled a little and the needle
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wasn't meant to peek.
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on another needle beneath a
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catch of vinyl and lemon
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smiles there remains
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that slow trail --
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fish guts, boardwalk
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palpations,
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a little hush
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where you get
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down and listen to my
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leaking.
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i am almost gone,
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the lambs have all grown
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into knives,
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and the reflection
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i left you
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pissed into
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the well,
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my reincarnation
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has nearly
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lapped
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away;
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yes,
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you
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and i
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into the faraway.
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1 May 13

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as freaking IF.  when i was writing tender the other day, i has used the phrase 'parlour tricks' (and a few others), but deleted them in the editing process.  uncanny.

have to say that is a beautiful looking spine. (7-14).  love the way you did that.  so full of music and interpretive dance (wtf i don't drama or dance, but you get the gist).

sad poem, but lovely way to say goodbye.
 — jenakajoffer

zipper-mary added
 — DeformedLion

i like 'it's me'

it made me laugh.

zipper mary... i may be missing the reference/meaning, but that's ok.
 — jenakajoffer

http://www.yo utube.com/watch?v=vzRuKnb2uuY
 — DeformedLion

hahahaha, niiiice
 — jenakajoffer

this is so fucking funny.  i laughed my ass off the way you have 'ripped out of my body'  that is a masterpiece in itself.  i mean, it's a poem all on it's own.  i want it, just like that.
 — jenakajoffer

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