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birthday bill
jenakajoffer

it's a little early
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but i can smell your age coming on
 2
like old piss in the can.
 3
 
 
candles are for cream-puffs
 4
but i bet you got a wish or two saved up
 5
like last week's enema.
 6
 
 
your salad days are over, mac--
 7
i've got a greenhorn and a wind-up toy
 8
to buzz you in the balls.
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you're gonna blow your gumdrop buttons
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all over my fava party,
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i just know it.
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10 May 13

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yawn
 — unknown

its the yawn which lets her stuff the apple in.
 — DeformedLion

exactly.

but yeah, this is goofy trash. :D
 — jenakajoffer

Happy birthday Linus! It's been 6 years since I gave birth to this poem.
Crazy. I can still smell yer pépe.
 — jenakajoffer

a lot of trueness to this
 — DeformedLion

Yes, I'm sure.

Love you, stinky Pepe
Hope you had a nice birthday. X
 — jenakajoffer

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