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birthday bill

it's a little early	1
but i can smell your age coming on	2
like old piss in the can.	3

candles are for cream-puffs	4
but i bet you got a wish or two saved up	5
like last week's enema.	6

your salad days are over, mac--	7
i've got a greenhorn and a wind-up toy	8
to buzz you in the balls.	9

you're gonna blow your gumdrop buttons	10
all over my fava party,	11
i just know it.	12

10 May 13

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yawn
— unknown

its the yawn which lets her stuff the apple in.
— DeformedLion

exactly.

but yeah, this is goofy trash. :D
— jenakajoffer

Happy birthday Linus! It's been 6 years since I gave birth to this poem.
Crazy. I can still smell yer pépe.
— jenakajoffer

a lot of trueness to this
— DeformedLion

Yes, I'm sure.

Love you, stinky Pepe
Hope you had a nice birthday. X
— jenakajoffer

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