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the Sun and the Sea
AlchemiA

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oh the Sea, the sapient Sea
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which rolls along in wave after wave,
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touching you and touching me,
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with its longing reach for shore,
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for so much more,
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while a red-ochre settling Sun warms the blood,
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as the Sea washes through every pore,
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as we long toward each other, again and again,
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and as we drown in this love once more ~
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topical-hypothesis: when an ancient ache in our Solar heart longs into swell, does a sympathetic beat excite us as well? http://goo.gl/t31US

14 May 13


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