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r dume iz s3ntim3ntal
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he rites [mindbog]:
 1
moons trawl stinkly thru swampways in muddy-murk circlets
 2
golden phoam candles dripdrop eldrintch - wax gone far n floaty
 3
decant chanterz poke deepdark waters n uprise them; bubblez
 4
methanes go.ghostly, invade branes in bump-breaving nostrils
 5
 
 
him winesip [mindbog]
 6
sloshy-gobblets drool down neck-stems, wets whip rings inta tables
 7
firmature gone redstained, wooden. slop howlz red n teethred yellow
 8
purple tongue-trench hax blobz aerborne: spittlez missiled at linens
 9
ghoulies drinkdrink. sop up blewk magicks; soakin them sunshinez
 10
 
 
they creeps [haunt-hunt]
 11
spirits slink [haunt-hunt] sneaky quiets. tick-tock tap-toe n sleamzy
 12
grandvather gongs n scarred kitty bolts cross-piano, scratches paper
 13
boudoires go ice-like [haunt-hunt]; echo empty under neverscene ceilings
 14
walk-in shadows again rehearse - yesterdudz happy n playn bone bongos
 15
 
 
them whisp'ringz [itstalks]
 16
latent lipslips clamber interiors on mist leggies, moaning
 17
twist-shamblerz harken [itstalks]: face stomachs chapchirp phrosty nuthins
 18
beak-busted birdlies flap featherstorms, signifakinx [itstalks]. grounded
 19
perfumed gravel-stank; rimy comes breezwept n downwind from roadkill
 20
 
 
it downpour [muksong]
 21
shroud-heavens nonleashed; make [muksong] leatherskinz squishy n pliant
 22
slushes pound as insex, clawcrawl innenout [muksong] draggin bloodtrailz
 23
undeads. limp burdened by toad-stranglers croakin-- sadsad symphonix
 24
[muksong] grey fingers severd; plop muted ivories, eyeballz n lungz
 25
 
 
shutupnow
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4 Jun 13

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reminds me of Ra-ism - i like this, challenges the language and the reader. good stuff.
 — jenn

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