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droplets
lalita

Clouds birthing droplets
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gravity guiding their way
 2
 
 
born again earthlings
 3

26 Jun 13

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I Love You.
 — p_p_love

birth ing
guid ing
earthl ings

how about:
birth
guides
earthings

i hate haikus.
 — jenakajoffer

Thanks P_P_love. Appreciate and like your input Jenkajoffer, despite you hating haikus ;)
 — lalita

A pleasure to read this
 — larrylark

no problemo lalita, haikus have to be pretty clever for me to take much shine to them.  i think there is only one haiku i have ever liked OR remembered.  
and that says a lot.
 — jenakajoffer

:)
 — fractalcore

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