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50 years later
sahibtorun

You are just as beautiful as the 1st day I saw you.
 1
50 years have taken all away your hair
 2
All I can see is the trail of kisses I left behind
 3
You are the beautiful mind
 4
Hidden behind stoic wall
 5
Ticking clockwork
 6
Perfect precision
 7
Sound logic
 8
 
 
I see the whole universe in your eyes
 9
The beating vortex of time
 10
The world has not been kind to you
 11
Dried up river of tears
 12
Deeply entrenched on your cheeks
 13
The underground water of your soul
 14
Has turn into a dessert
 15
 
 
You always wish you had your bothers looks
 16
The tall body
 17
The full set of hair
 18
And a proper nose
 19
I wish that I had stopped you back then
 20
To tell you that you were beautiful
 21
Even when you did not believe it
 22
You are beautiful
 23
Even when you don’t want hear it
 24
But now my words are just soundless whispers to the moon
 25
 
 
Your ear tingling when caress them
 26
When I kiss them
 27
When lick them as we made love
 28
In the heat of the excitement
 29
You would lay there
 30
But I know you were transcendent
 31
Our bodies unite
 32
But in your mind
 33
We are boundless
 34
Formless Spirits
 35
Swimming among the stars
 36
 
 
Your lips press together
 37
In every photo
 38
You fear the world would see your jagged teeth
 39
But I fear that the world will never get see you smile again
 40
I can feel your anger toward me
 41
From the sublet twitch
 42
At the corner of your lips
 43
I wish I can kiss the pain away
 44
Undo the knot in your heart
 45
The messed that I created
 46
When I chose to walk away
 47
I know those lips have stop answer all my phone calls
 48
Has stop replying my massages
 49
I cannot tell you the things I need to say
 50
So I have written you a letter
 51
Sealed in it is my heart.
 52
I stand by the mailbox
 53
I grip tightly on to hope
 54
I pray that you will come back to me
 55
I kiss your name
 56
And watch turn
 57
Wheel of fortune turn
 58
 
 
(I cant make you love me by Bonnie Raitt)
 59
Cause I can't make you love me if you don't
 60
You can't make your heart feel something it won't
 61
Here in the dark, in these final hours
 62
I will lay down my heart and I'll feel the power
 63
But you won't, no you won't
 64
'Cause I can't make you love me, if you don't
 65

17 Jul 13


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I Love You.
 — p_p_love

Hugz p_p_love
 — sahibtorun

i'd love going 50 years later. this is hopeful
 — unknown

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