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"HOW DO YOU QUOTE PARALLEL LINES IN CONTRAST?"
fractalcore

"yoga: the introvert's way of going obvious with his high regard for privacy."
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~ double Om s[+]even, private defective
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"they all plagiarized the baboonic plague."
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~ spock to yoda painting einstein's clogged nostrils
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:p
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yeah, yeah...
looks like poetry

is dead
:p

19 Jul 13

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This makes no sense at all
Sorry  but this ain't  clever,
just some 6th formers approximation.
 — unknown

just beyond my scope of comprehension
howevs I like how it is sui generis, I do.
 — JKWeb

Liked the middle two lines but overall you lost me
 — larrylark

Sun dewy melons
nestles by the museum
of indentured labour.
"That's proper imagery" .
 — unknown

yeah, yeah

-- Don't understand this sort of poem -- is it like, an e-fad?

three men were standing around a hole in the earth. they were all blind. two were lame.

if all bind people stand around a hole in the earth, and some blind people are lame...

how many people stand around holes in the earth?

hmmmm - nup, i don't get what i'm saying either

touché
 — unknown

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