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YES, HITLER WAS A SYNESTHETIC ANESTHESIA.
fractalcore

the sun is hot and fiery
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and i'm a cry'ogenic mess --
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proximity sucks
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like you're distant,
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love.
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written 8/12/13

:p

23 Aug 13

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Why?
 — unknown

why nut(s)?

:p
 — fractalcore

hey frac!

this yours? it's jean yes.
 — mandolyn

I don't see what Hitler has to do in this poem / it's synaesthesia that explains this poem if I have understood it.
remove Hitler, it's really like a hooker word in your work... and ill serves it.
 — greenmantle

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