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IN TRANSIT: motion-savvy
fractalcore

oh, well. while there seems to be
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a GAWDdamned energizer bunny
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in all of us,
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we are not allowed to falter,
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or fault her, or fall terrrrrrrrr
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rrribly-high, or -low, or -slow,
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or -fast.
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jest, ask, duh, bunny, diss:
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watts yore cure too motion
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sick-nest?
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written on aug 31, 2013
in memory of the venus transit 2012

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5 Sep 13

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