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ribbons and ribbons of burgundy
unknown

i watch
 1
you knot
 2
too slow
 3
to pack
 4
ribbons and ribbons
 5
wrapped around
 6
a complex shape
 7
all-burgundy
 8
a façade of what i see
 9
me
 10

16 Sep 13

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Comments:

Abstract. Kind of neat.
 — unknown

lots of 'knot' poems lately.
i love the title.
the poem is pretty nifty.
 — mandolyn

thanks. this will wine.
 — unknown

is the 'me' in L10 playing frogger? ;)
 — mandolyn

ha!l10 is some thing to come back to.
 — unknown

i think it goes well at the beginning of L10
 — mandolyn

originally, right?
 — unknown

yes, what you had originally.
 — mandolyn

lol, it's so funny every time i come back to this poem that little 'me' has moved- like it's stalking the rest of the poem.
 — mandolyn

thanks. agree.
 — unknown

hey you, stop watching me!
 — unknown

Oh!
 — unknown

pretty neat, indeed,

;)
 — fractalcore

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