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jellyfish back strophe

she disturbs meaning
in rhythmic pulsations --
exciting to luminescence a deeply subtext'd verse;
'but don't mistake a stinging strophe for arrogance.'
'that's just fierce presence,'
moved by waves of astonishment
cascading through a nervous and vascular system
spontaneously overflowed  
with a reaching iridescent tentacle
she'll simply, elegantly, fluoresce a gleam in your eyes

7 Oct 13

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