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jellyfish back strophe
AlchemiA

she disturbs meaning
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in rhythmic pulsations --
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exciting to luminescence a deeply subtext'd verse;
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'but don't mistake a stinging strophe for arrogance.'
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'that's just fierce presence,'
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moved by waves of astonishment
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cascading through a nervous and vascular system
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spontaneously overflowed  
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                                          (sea-through)
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with a reaching iridescent tentacle
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she'll simply, elegantly, fluoresce a gleam in your eyes
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7 Oct 13

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