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conjugation i should muster
iliili

tab opens
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to a display-
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celestial affection
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is most clever
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of you, ever
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i would snack on
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your brains deliciously
 7
along with a peanut
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thinking it is past tense
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to sneak
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but it's not
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it only makes me
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to be
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a future past
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imperfect sense
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to a verb love
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i ride on-
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all-spectrum
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on this side
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of the planet
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made yours
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gone ethereal
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8 Oct 13

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Added a few more lines.
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Oh, someone using the same word as mine is honest coincidence. What could this mean? argh!
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I'm not sure though, if this is what this write is trying to convey but i need that one word badly. I'm sure this is not well done. Medium rare, i should say.
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