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conjugation i should muster

tab opens
to a display-
celestial affection
is most clever
of you, ever
i would snack on
your brains deliciously
along with a peanut
thinking it is past tense
to sneak
but it's not
it only makes me
to be
a future past
imperfect sense
to a verb love
i ride on-
on this side
of the planet
made yours
gone ethereal

8 Oct 13

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Added a few more lines.
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Oh, someone using the same word as mine is honest coincidence. What could this mean? argh!
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I'm not sure though, if this is what this write is trying to convey but i need that one word badly. I'm sure this is not well done. Medium rare, i should say.
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