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in the end is an Oh
AlchemiA

:an invertendo-innuendo
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"I do this, I do that, but not this, not this."
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--> look here, not this <-- 'THIS'
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Negative space is a series of views that catch you into their tumult of many reflections reflecting into the swoon of a just-in-time epiphany. 'THIS' ... "is going on, and I go, and the days go by. I drop in." "Oh." I go and the days go by and I drop in again.'
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you look at change and see how it changes into 'words' and 'life'  Don't look
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                  miss the point ORANGE
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It's not about your tinkering-rationality "Sit down and have a drink" I drink; we drink. I look up signifies something too.
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... which is going on, and I go, and the days go by."Oh." I go and the days go by and I drop in again.'
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opuǝnuuı-opuǝʇɹǝʌuı uɐ :ɥo uɐ sı puǝ ǝɥʇ uı
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in the end is an Oh... "Oh." I go and the days go .   oh.
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25 Oct 13

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