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Idle stares at absent
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notifications,
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Addicted to person Y
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added on a whim;
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Stalked to the thin line
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between crime and lonely nights,
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Today we are not together,
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But tomorrow I shall
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wish you into my inbox
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Will you into my life,
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Then poke the love into you.
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I am friend 1199 of
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1200 too many,
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The 5 minute accidental
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brush with fate that
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you're too nice to ignore,
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Comments a dozen,
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Wit taken to the extreme,
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The protective eye on your
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wall, The fly that wants
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to be noticed.
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There is nothing healthy
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in what we're doing,
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You're a bad influence
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on my happily ever after,
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A click later you are out
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of my life...
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Three weeks later
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I get a friend request
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from you.
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31 Oct 13

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lol.
1200, that's A LOT. i tried to keep mine under 100 a year ago, but have failed lately.
'added on a whim' :)
this poem is great.
 — mandolyn

you're funny. it's what i liked most.
 — eloves

Fresh and so relatable.
 — whostalking

you're back!
;)
 — fractalcore

Hey fractalcore, how's it going? Yup was on hiatus :)

Thanks mandolin, elves and whostalking! Glad u liked it!
 — section4

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