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NAH N' AYE
fractalcore

5 octaves & 3 frets along,
 1
nodes nod in silent reverie --
 2
umbilical strings left us'under
 3
four actual harmonics to be.
 4




happy 63rd birthday, mother.
thank you for everything.

<3 <3 <3
---{@

3 Nov 13

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happy birthday, fracs mom!
 — mandolyn

A poem only a mother & other poets could love. :) Nicely written, and...
many happy returns, frac's mom!
 — clupeidae

Happy Birthday to you!
~and many mooooore~~~~~
 — unknown

Mathematically speaking, she was born in the Tiger year, yes?
 — unknown

Thank god for mothers
 — larrylark

<3 <3 <3
 — AlchemiA

thanks, ever-one!
happy mother's day.
;)
 — fractalcore

Happy Birthday 2 ur Mom, Frac!  :-)
 — starr

Great
 — unknown

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