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Brain Trust Synapse Solipsism
horses

the subjective sine wave waxes to a crest.
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my lips betray that elusive, genuine spark—
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so elusive, in fact, that my knees nearly buckle.
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these willing arms are lured to a plane
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where the folly of man is just as weightless
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as is generic the fear of the abyss.
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so let us dance to west egg’s anachronous tunes
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and lock eyes, mesmerized, through clarity’s miasma,
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cackling madness into our own starry reflections,
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channeling orgasm at the thought of their fictions…
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their vacant renditions of erroneous wishes,
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and dreams of picturesque scenes
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with vacant misters and misses.
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temporal vines entangle and stray
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but these magnetized mirror neurons are here to stay.
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traversing many oceans and moons,
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they will always rendezvous a nebula—
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a sublime anomaly in space.
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26 Nov 13

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i'm so mesmerised with themes of maths and sciences. i'm more particular though on how it arrives specific.
 — catch-22

excellent work!

<3
 — fractalcore

a truly excellent poem
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