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a flower dazzling from cold
herculean shine
in its most difficult winter
naught of warmth
rain has to calm
perch you under trees;
summer will wait
wilting then, is gorgeous

16 Dec 13

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wilting is the new black.

great poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Hurculeon and gorgeous-brilliant word choices.  

Great poem.
 — DeformedLion

^ if Jenakajoffer said this was shit you would say it's shit twice.
 — unknown

Well she is pretty smart
 — DeformedLion

^ Maybe so, but that doesn't change the fact you appear needy.
 — unknown

Well that's why I have a blanket.  Nevertheless, I am at a loss as to why you would really care too much much. Was she mean to you or something?
 — DeformedLion

I am not mean to anyone,

just you linus.  you're special that way.
 — jenakajoffer

I'm very needy...am i allowed to say this poem is not poo?..I hate using the word siht as it is so crudely unnecessary.

Larry bottomless Lark
 — larrylark

this writing, then, is gorgeous.
 — fractalcore

it's like a future was written. more likely, dejavu.

 — catch-22

great read, as usual.
 — fractalcore