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childhood fantasy
Amaranta

a karmic relationship

a star isn't born
 1
my tender mind whispers
 2
as small dippers sleep
 3
to my innocence-
 4
lucidity isn't darkness,
 5
someone tells
 6
as luck illuminates it
 7
~
 8
i was twelve, then,
 9
my birthday
 10
when oddity dawned on me;
 11
a child unbending,
 12
looking for polaris
 13
mooning over big dippers
 14
and fantasized kisses
 15
~
 16

18 Dec 13

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