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pillow talk

wear me a different cloak tonight
to sanctify this bond
pretend there is love
that i'm outside waiting
to climb 24 stories to our nest.
be my guide to discover heights
navigate sacred gates.
let's get lost once again
feed abandoned territories
explore where hunger is desperate;
end cursing long droughts.

18 Dec 13

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Highly charged and reaches dizzying heights

Larry cloud man Lark
 — larrylark

This is more thoughtful-romantic than your usual self indulgent confusion.

Don't get me wrong, it's still confusing,
you done good :)
 — jenakajoffer

"explore where hunger is desperate" -- my favorite line.
 — spaye08