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pillow talk
catch-22

wear me a different cloak tonight
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to sanctify this bond
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pretend there is love
 3
that i'm outside waiting
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to climb 24 stories to our nest.
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be my guide to discover heights
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navigate sacred gates.
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let's get lost once again
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feed abandoned territories
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explore where hunger is desperate;
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end cursing long droughts.
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18 Dec 13

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Highly charged and reaches dizzying heights

Larry cloud man Lark
 — larrylark

This is more thoughtful-romantic than your usual self indulgent confusion.

Don't get me wrong, it's still confusing,
you done good :)
 — jenakajoffer

"explore where hunger is desperate" -- my favorite line.
 — spaye08

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